Survivor Testimony: Primary Sources for Research-Based Essays

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Marietta Drücker

Helga Waldman

Publishing Party on Tues., 12/2

Please join fourth grade students as they celebrate the publishing of their personal essays.

Date: Tuesday, 12/2/08

Time: 9:45 – 10:30 a.m.

Location: Room 310

Hosted By: Ms. Shubitz

Por favor únase a los estudiantes de cuarto grado mientras ellos celebran la publicación de sus ensayos personales.

Fecha: Martes, 12/2/08

Hora: 9:45 – 10:30 a.m.

Lugar: Salon 310

Ofrecido por: Sra. Shubitz

Concluding Paragraphs – Personal Essay

OPTIONS FOR SENTENCES 1 & 5 IN YOUR CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH:

· (My thesis) is true. Because this is true, isn’t it also true that…

· I realize that…

· This makes me think…
I realize that when I…, I feel…

· Other people should care about this because…

· This is important because…

SENTENCES 2, 3, & 4 IN YOUR CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH

Restate the reasons from your envelope in a different way.

Nice Job!

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Keep working hard on your introductory and concluding paragraphs to your personal essays while I’m gone kiddos! Overall, the body paragraphs you produced in the past two days are incredible. You should be so proud of yourselves!

See you on Monday!